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    #1

    better sentence

    Hello Teachers,

    I am new forum today. can you please help me this sentence?

    " I would like to inform to you about removing an applicant out of this case due to recently got married last year"

    Please correct a better sentence.

    Thanks in advance

    ken

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    #2

    Re: better sentence

    ***neither a teacher nor a native-speaker***

    ...inform you, not inform to you.
    ...since he/she recently got married.
    Time is relative but it doesn't make last year recently. (Unless it's 31.12.2009 and you're saying this in 01.01.2010)

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    #3

    Re: better sentence

    euncu,

    Thanks for your help

    ken


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    Re: better sentence

    " I would like to inform you about removing an applicant from this case due to her marrying last year"

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