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    #1

    Please correct my sentence

    Hi!

    He suffered kidney failure.

    His kidney gave out.

    His kidney stopped working.

    His kidney broke down.

    Are all above sentences correct?

    Thanks indeed.

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    Re: Please correct my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Nathan Mckane View Post
    Hi!

    He suffered kidney failure.

    His kidney gave out.

    His kidney stopped working.

    His kidney broke down.

    Are all above sentences correct?

    Thanks indeed.
    The first one is correct, the second and third are acceptable in casual speech. The fourth is not good.

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