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    #1

    Is this sentence correct

    This is not required for the shipping order, please deliver the goods for the appointed location and load the spare parts as many as into the container space.

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    Re: Is this sentence correct

    It's unclear what this refers to, so the link between the two parts of the sentence is not obvious. I'd say 'deliver the goods to the address agreed' and maybe 'load as many of the spare parts as possible in the container'

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