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    Please correct my sentences

    Her good grades were all flukey.

    She gave herself away like a lamb to the slaughter.

    She told every thing to the teacher like a lamb to the slaughter.

    The fluency by which he speaks English is astonishing.

    There are a lot of ways to circumvent/get round the obstacles.

    Their anonymity will be guaranteed by the police.

    Please correct my sentences.Thanks.

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    Re: Please correct my sentences

    [QUOTE=Nathan Mckane;624049]Her good grades were all flukey. Doesn't make sense.

    She gave herself away like a lamb to the slaughter. OK

    She told every thing to the teacher like a lamb to the slaughter. I wouldn't use the expression "lamb to....." in this sentence.

    The fluency by which he speaks English is astonishing. His English fluency is astonishing.

    There are a lot of ways to circumvent/get round the obstacles. Either is OK.

    Their anonymity will be guaranteed by the police. OK

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