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    A shocking experience

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    I've just gone through a week-long training seminar which was conducted by an American institute and took place in the desert. The purpose of the seminar was to train qualified social activists to lead a social change. That week was terrible for me. Since then, I've hardly slept and eaten because it was a shocking experience to me. I'm confused and trying to calculate my next step.

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    Re: A shocking experience

    Quote Originally Posted by motico View Post
    Any corrections will be welcomed. Thank you!


    I've just gone through a week-long training seminar which was conducted by an American institute and took place in the desert. The purpose of the seminar was to train qualified social activists to lead a bring about social change. That week was terrible for me. Since then, I've hardly slept and or eaten because it was a shocking experience to me. I'm confused and trying to calculate my next step.
    See above.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: A shocking experience

    As the person has just gone through it, I would change 'that week' at the start of the third sentence- maybe It was a terrible week for me.

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