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    Are these two statements correct?

    Beautiful Handcrafted jewellery which brings originality to classic style and understated elegance

    Designs by Karat Art reflect the strong sense of being a woman who desire Luxury.

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    Re: Are these two statements correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Beautiful handcrafted jewellery which brings originality to classic style and understated elegance.


    Designs by Karat Art reflect the strong sense of being a woman who desires luxury.
    See above. I've corrected the slight errors. I don't like the second sentence very much. I'm not sure that something can "reflect the strong sense of being a woman".

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