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    can't figure out to say this, pls HELP!

    Hi all,

    I'm a translator for mobile applications such as those of iPhone and have a sentence that I'd like to add on my business website, but can't figure out to write it correctly. Please help.

    What I'd like to say are:
    a) Some of our clients' applications are ranked in the top 10 after I translated their applications.
    b) Their applications weren't ranked in even the top 100 originally.

    And the sentence that I come up with is:
    Some of our clients' apps ranks in the top 10 out of 100 only by localizing the languages.

    But I don't think this is making sense. Please correct it and brush up. I need to make the sentence as short as possible.

    Thanks in advance,
    M

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    Re: can't figure out to say this, pls HELP!

    Quote Originally Posted by mitsuwao23 View Post
    Hi all,

    I'm a translator for mobile applications such as those of iPhone and have a sentence that I'd like to add on my business website, but can't figure out to write it correctly. Please help.

    What I'd like to say are:
    a) Some of our clients' applications are ranked in the top 10 after I translated their applications.
    b) Their applications weren't ranked in even the top 100 originally.

    And the sentence that I come up with is:
    Some of our clients' apps ranks in the top 10 out of 100 only by localizing the languages.

    But I don't think this is making sense. Please correct it and brush up. I need to make the sentence as short as possible.

    Thanks in advance,
    M
    Some of our clients' applications [now] rank in the Top 10 after translation.

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