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    Is this sentence correct?

    Starting from 1st July, Fedex requested a CR number if the document or parcel is used for third party account number. Would you please provide it to us, otherwise, we cannot send out the parts

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    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Starting from 1st July, Fedex requested a CR number if the document or parcel is used for third party account number. Would you please provide it to us, otherwise, we cannot send out the parts
    It's OK but as an AmE speaker, I would prefer "Starting July 1st......." and "requests" and "for a" or "with a" third party account number".

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    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    I agree. You also need a full stop at the end of the sentence and no comma after "otherwise".

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