Student or Learner
I have written a text and I would like to know if it is grammatically correct. It is as follows:
"From my town they arrived to play at this famous event.
The way they played before had raised our hopes.
These players wanted to get the maximun price at the end.
We all who love this game saw them perform well.
With congratulations and cheerings they were received and
lifting the golden cup will they be remembered."
It is about soccer World Cup. Thank you very much in advance. I would appreciate any suggestion.