You usually say your objective is to 'do something', not to 'aim to do something'.My Objectives at Work for next year.
Small letters for objectives and work, colon at the end.
I aimto obtain the support of my managers (,) in order to improve Institute’s Office at the Island(words other than special nouns should not be capitalized), which currently containscomprises/consists of : Notifications Section, Communicable Diseases Section and Mortuary Services (,) by providing all necessary requirementsservices for these sections; to meet the needs of the community here and make them benefit from the services provided by the Institute.
I aimto develop my skills and knowledge that may be useful in performingdeveloping my career and fit my current job, due to my work in most of PHP sections; by attending the workshops and courses; Therefore, I’ve planned to start with a course in “Medical Terminology” which will be held on 4th October 2010(,) at the Institute.
I aimto do my best to meet the needs of the community here at Delma Island, in order to rid their transactions in terms of providing consultancy and advisory services at Institute’s Office here, Iinstead of having to travel outsideout of the Island , across the sea, reserving hotels and wasting their time and efforts.