Tes
Junior Member
- Joined
- Oct 5, 2009
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Amharic
- Home Country
- Ethiopia
- Current Location
- United States
Here is very important letter that I need to submit to Office of Student Financial Aid. As English is my second language, I may make a mistakes while I write this kind of letter so please help me out by correcting grammer mistakes. Thank you in advance for your willing to help me.
Dear Office of Student Financial Aid,
I am writing this letter to appeal the suspension of financial aid grant for the 2010 Fall semester. The grounds on which I wish to appeal are that I have been making satisfactory result towards my educational goal. To start with, In 2008, I had graduated in Biomedical Science from Cambridge biomedical careers program through Just-A-start and Bunker Hill Community Collage, In Spring 2010, I have completed two classes with excellent result, and I am currently taking classes as a full-time student , which I am doing perfectly.
Unfortunately, during spring of 2005, I had enrolled in a total of four classes but did not meet the minimum standards for academic progress which has cause my financial aid to be denied for my next enrollment for the 2010 Fall semester. In fact, I failed to completed my education due to family emergency. My father, who was living in ethiopia was died while I was actively attending at BHCC. By the time, I wasn't in a position dealing with stress and schooling.
Also, During Summer of 2008 and Fall of 2009, I was full time employee. I had a very tedious work schedule (12 hour shifts) which caused me to be in the office more than at home. During office hours I was unable to work on my class assignments and by the time I would get home, it would be late and I would be in the process of getting ready for the next day and trying to make up time with my patient mom. I soon realized that returning to school along with working longer hours was more difficult than I thought and that I may have put too much on my plate that I could actually handle.
Although my financial situation is challenging at the moment, there is no doubt in my mind that I will succeed at Bunker Hill Community Collage. Please know that school is of great importance to me and I have come up with a new plan for the following semester to manage my time and school work; I believe it will be very effective for me and I will bring all of my grades and cumulative grade point average up to, or above, BHCC’s acceptable academic standard policy.
The Steps I am going to take to assure successful academic progress in the future:
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• Obtain a tutor for the classes I find difficult.* I have made myself familiar with the tutoring center on campus.
• Meet with each of my instructors a talk with them about what they believe will make me a better student in their class.
• Go to the scheduled office hours of each instructor when I am having difficulty with the class material.
• Develop a relationship with other students to form study groups.
• Go to class on time as scheduled.
My goal is to complete an Associates Degree in Biomedical Science. Without student financial aid, I will be financially unable to complete my goal. Please know that I am extremely focused on my future and my dedication to my education is paramount. I am aware that I am allowed to submit an appeal once in regards to Financial Aid determination in my educational experience at Bunker Hill Community Collage. This is the only appeal I will ever make, due to the fact that I am extremely determined to rise above the minimum requirements for Financial Aid acceptance and good standing at BHCC. Please allow me a second chance to prove that I can be a model student and achieve academic excellence.
If you have any questions or need any additional information, please contact me at ta111@yahoo.com or 617 000 0000.
I thank you for your consideration to this appeal.
Sincerely,
Dear Office of Student Financial Aid,
I am writing this letter to appeal the suspension of financial aid grant for the 2010 Fall semester. The grounds on which I wish to appeal are that I have been making satisfactory result towards my educational goal. To start with, In 2008, I had graduated in Biomedical Science from Cambridge biomedical careers program through Just-A-start and Bunker Hill Community Collage, In Spring 2010, I have completed two classes with excellent result, and I am currently taking classes as a full-time student , which I am doing perfectly.
Unfortunately, during spring of 2005, I had enrolled in a total of four classes but did not meet the minimum standards for academic progress which has cause my financial aid to be denied for my next enrollment for the 2010 Fall semester. In fact, I failed to completed my education due to family emergency. My father, who was living in ethiopia was died while I was actively attending at BHCC. By the time, I wasn't in a position dealing with stress and schooling.
Also, During Summer of 2008 and Fall of 2009, I was full time employee. I had a very tedious work schedule (12 hour shifts) which caused me to be in the office more than at home. During office hours I was unable to work on my class assignments and by the time I would get home, it would be late and I would be in the process of getting ready for the next day and trying to make up time with my patient mom. I soon realized that returning to school along with working longer hours was more difficult than I thought and that I may have put too much on my plate that I could actually handle.
Although my financial situation is challenging at the moment, there is no doubt in my mind that I will succeed at Bunker Hill Community Collage. Please know that school is of great importance to me and I have come up with a new plan for the following semester to manage my time and school work; I believe it will be very effective for me and I will bring all of my grades and cumulative grade point average up to, or above, BHCC’s acceptable academic standard policy.
The Steps I am going to take to assure successful academic progress in the future:
*
• Obtain a tutor for the classes I find difficult.* I have made myself familiar with the tutoring center on campus.
• Meet with each of my instructors a talk with them about what they believe will make me a better student in their class.
• Go to the scheduled office hours of each instructor when I am having difficulty with the class material.
• Develop a relationship with other students to form study groups.
• Go to class on time as scheduled.
My goal is to complete an Associates Degree in Biomedical Science. Without student financial aid, I will be financially unable to complete my goal. Please know that I am extremely focused on my future and my dedication to my education is paramount. I am aware that I am allowed to submit an appeal once in regards to Financial Aid determination in my educational experience at Bunker Hill Community Collage. This is the only appeal I will ever make, due to the fact that I am extremely determined to rise above the minimum requirements for Financial Aid acceptance and good standing at BHCC. Please allow me a second chance to prove that I can be a model student and achieve academic excellence.
If you have any questions or need any additional information, please contact me at ta111@yahoo.com or 617 000 0000.
I thank you for your consideration to this appeal.
Sincerely,