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    #1

    sentence correction

    Get a variety of sweets like marshmallows, candies and much more.

    Can I write much 'more come' if I have already written 'like' before it???

    Please help!

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    #2

    Re: sentence correction

    Not a teacher.

    I don't see why not. It sounds ok to me, it sounds like you're advertising something. Just a slight note the sentence starts abit abrupt. Perhaps 'such as' would be a better replacement if you are unsure.

    Advertising a sweet shop - 'Come get a variety of sweets such as marshmallows, candies and much, much more!'

    Maybe telling a friend what you can buy - 'You can get a variety of sweets such as marshmallows, candies and much more.'

    Hope this helps.

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