A few suggestions:
I'm writing to you because I want you to know how I spent my holiday in Northwold as you had advised
ly,I must say that the Star Hotel you told me about was very efficient andenjoyable and the staff was very efficient (an object [such as a hotel] can't be 'efficient'). Both the rooms and the restaurant were excellent.
However,the brochure said that the hill top castle and the winding street were amazing but the castle closed (or was closed) for the weekend, so I
hadn't haddidn't have the opportunity to visit ingit.That was quite disappointing!
Furthermore,I would like to add that The Festival Theatre,which I was really looking forward to visiting, opens only in summer.
Moreover, you should have warned me that most antique shops and both of the art galleries were closed and this
factannoyed me very much.
Lastly (or Finally), I
want to complain also aboutthe open-air swimming pool whichwas completely unapproachable beacause the climate was absolutely freezing.
As the result of my complaints and inconvenience, I think there should be due to me at least 50% of the
amount ofmoney I've paid to your travel agency.
Student or Learner