plz point out my mistakes thanks

[adnanmushtaq]

On the second day of first test match between Pakistan and England, both teams faced ups and downs. England lost his last 6 wickets on just 23 runs and they were succeeded to make a good total of 354 on bouncy and dry pitch. Pakistan started his game by loosing 6 wickets on just 47 runs. NO one could resist ENglish bollers apart ASIF and SHOAIB. They took their team score on 105 but SHOIB could n t face FNN s bowling for a long time. His catch was caught by STRUSS who was standing on third slip.

 

[emsr2d2]

On the second day of the first test match between Pakistan and England, both teams faced ups and downs. England lost [STRIKE]his[/STRIKE] their last 6 wickets [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] for just 23 runs, and they [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] succeeded [STRIKE]to make[/STRIKE] in making a good total of 354 on a bouncy and dry pitch.

Pakistan started [STRIKE]his[/STRIKE] the game by [STRIKE]loosing[/STRIKE] losing 6 wickets [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] for just 47 runs. [STRIKE]NO one[/STRIKE] No-one could resist (perhaps "deal with") the English [STRIKE]bollers[/STRIKE] bowlers apart from Asif and Shoaib. They took [STRIKE]their team[/STRIKE] Pakistan's score [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] to 105 but Shoaib [STRIKE]could n t[/STRIKE] couldn't face FNN's bowling for[STRIKE] a long time[/STRIKE] very long. [STRIKE]His catch [/STRIKE] He was caught out by Struss who was standing [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] at third slip.

See above for my amendments. Cricket's not my favourite sport, but I'm pretty sure I've got the terminology right!!!

 

[Rover_KE]

Good try, emsr.

(Para 2) 'Pakistan started their first innings and soon lost 6 wickets for just 47 runs'.

(Last sentence) 'He was caught by Strauss at third slip.'

'FNN' should be 'Finn' and 'STRUSS' is 'Strauss'.

Rover

 

[adnanmushtaq]

See above for my amendments. Cricket's not my favourite sport, but I'm pretty sure I've got the terminology right!!!

thak you very much

 

[adnanmushtaq]

See above for my amendments. Cricket's not my favourite sport, but I'm pretty sure I've got the terminology right!!!

thank you soooo much, you are very good in cricket terminology.