With all due respect to Gillnetter, there are a couple of other amendments:
You need a space after "Mr." in "Dear Mr. Atey"
The first word of the letter should be "Thank" not "Thanks".
In paragraph 2, Gillnetter corrected your use of "Chillies" to "chile". However, the singular of "chillies" is simply "chilli". (Chile is the country).
I'm sure these were simply oversights on Gillnetter's part, as his corrections are usually spot on!