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    is this correct?

    I want to send an email to all Sales Executives to send their daily sales report on time- see below.

    Dear All,

    All are again requested to send the daily sales report before 10 am. If anyone send after the said time will not be accounted/ invalid.

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    Re: is this correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by francycham View Post
    I want to send an email to all Sales Executives to send their daily sales report on time- see below.

    Dear All,

    All are again requested to send the daily sales report before 10 am. If anyone sends after the said time, the report will not be accounted and will be considered as invalid.
    ==Not a teacher===

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    #3

    Re: is this correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by francycham View Post
    I want to send an email to all Sales Executives to send their daily sales report on time- see below.

    Dear All,

    All are again requested to send the daily sales report before 10 am. If anyone send after the said time will not be accounted/ invalid.
    Starting with "All are again requested..." is very unnatural.

    Dear All

    Please ensure that you send your daily sales reports before 10am. Any reports received after that time will be deemed invalid.

    Thank you.

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