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    Is my sentence correct?

    Is my sentence correct?

    "In the furthest corner of my mind, wedged between the reality some old college days' memory is still hanging, safe inside me. I wish I could turn back clock, so that I could live those moments all over again. God's people, Two thousand years of waiting for their Messiah, and they're still persistent as hell."

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    Re: Is my sentence correct?

    Not a teacher.

    "Turn back the clock" or "turn back time." Also, you don't need to capitalize "two thousand" after the comma of the second sentence.

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