[Essay] Topic: as the number of commercials is on the increase on our Tv, many viewers feel..

[thaoly91]

In today's society, our lives are surrounded by a huge amount of commercials. It appears on almost of mean of communication such as TV, radio, newspaper with a thick density. By the way, the advertisement has approached to some extent the belief of consumers. But the remarkable things is that many advertisements are inflated more than the real content as well as it bring up many troublesome things to every people!

It is easy to realize that , thank to the advanced technique, advertisements today can have a wide connection in our society.With the main mean of communication of advertisemnet is through images and logos, directly influencing people. Therefore, almost advertiser have to attach special important to the quantity of images or screen shot instead of its content and products. That means products occurred on TV, not only does it lack the technical inspection in real, but also advertisers are deceiving customers' hopes, who ready to spend a lot of money to purchase their products. That is unfair to people.

Another important thing is that people, after working hard hours, spending their valuable time by watching their favourite film or program, are interrupted by some advertisements. That will keep people in suspense but badly , the feeling people get during a romantic movie or thriller will never come back again. As a consequence people, for sure will have an incisive reason in opposing the new strategy of advertisers by ostracising their products.

To sum up, the density of advertisements can lead to a series of tiresome things to people. In my view, commercials shoul be allocated efficiently to other areas, balacing time more sensibly in order to solve this problem

 

[shroob]

Not a teacher only a native.

In today's society, our lives are surrounded by a huge amount of commercials. Commercials appear in large amounts on almost every means of communication, such as television, radio and in newspapers. Appearing in such density, it is no surprise advertisements have, to some extent, impacted on the beliefs of consumers. The expectations of the customers, after having witnessed the inflated claims of such commercials, are often unrealistic and lead to many problems when they find the product fails to live up to expectations.

It is easy to see, thanks to the advanced techniques used in advertising today, the impact adverts are having on our society. The main means of communication of advertisements is through images and logos which directly try to influence people. Therefore, almost every advertiser also attaches special importance not only to the content of adverts, but also to the quantity of images or screen time exposure of the advert. This often leads to the situation where the products advertised on television not only exagerate their claims, but by doing so, also deceive customers who trustfully purchase the product based on these claims.

Another important issue is that many people, after a hard days work, like spending their valuable time by watching their favourite film or television program. However, this relaxation is spoilt due to continous interruptions by numerous advertisements. This undoubtedly keeps people in suspense but at the same time badly ruins the feelings people experience during a romantic movie or a thriller, which will never come back again. A consequence of this is that people are starting to boycott the advertised products.


Hope this helps, I'm not a teacher like I said, only a native.

EDIT: Have rechecked and amended a few details.

 

[thaoly91]

Not a teacher only a native.

In today's society, our lives are surrounded by a huge amount of commercials. Commercials appear in large amounts on almost every means of communication, such as television, radio and in newspapers. Appearing in such density, it is no surprise advertisements have, to some extent, impacted on the beliefs of consumers. The expectations of the customers, after having witnessed the inflated claims of such commercials, are often unrealistic and lead to many problems when they find the product fails to live up to expectations.

It is easy to see, thanks to the advanced techniques used in advertising today, the impact adverts are having on our society. The main means of communication of advertisements is through images and logos which directly try to influence people. Therefore, almost every advertiser also attaches special importance not only to the content of adverts, but also to the quantity of images or screen time exposure of the advert. This often leads to the situation where the products advertised on television not only exagerate their claims, but by doing so, also deceive customers who trustfully purchase the product based on these claims.

Another important issue is that many people, after a hard days work, like spending their valuable time by watching their favourite film or television program. However, this relaxation is spoilt due to continous interruptions by numerous advertisements. This undoubtedly keeps people in suspense but at the same time badly ruins the feelings people experience during a romantic movie or a thriller, which will never come back again. A consequence of this is that people are starting to boycott the advertised products.


Hope this helps, I'm not a teacher like I said, only a native.

EDIT: Have rechecked and amended a few details.

Well. I think that is better than before! Thank U so much! I'm thankful to U about that!