Miao.L
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- Aug 8, 2010
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- Chinese
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- China
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- UK
Hello,
I am writing a letter. so may I begin it with 'Many sorry for disturbing you, although I know you must be very busy after vacation.'
Does it make sense? I kind of feel that 'although' is not a proper connection to be used between these two sentences. But I don't know which one is better.
Look forward to your advice.
Thank you.
Miao
ps. may I say 'although' is not a proper connection to be used here; or I should have said 'although' is not a proper connection should be used here.
I am writing a letter. so may I begin it with 'Many sorry for disturbing you, although I know you must be very busy after vacation.'
Does it make sense? I kind of feel that 'although' is not a proper connection to be used between these two sentences. But I don't know which one is better.
Look forward to your advice.
Thank you.
Miao
ps. may I say 'although' is not a proper connection to be used here; or I should have said 'although' is not a proper connection should be used here.
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