I want send this letter below to my manager to increment my salary, could you please check if it is good.
Dear Mr. abdul malik
I kindly Request a salary increment .
This is because the current salary of 5000 AED without a car.
After taking the car from me, I am having trouble to travel to work and the cost a great movement and thu spend half of my salary to go to work>
I'm looking forward to a favorable response from you.
Thanks and Regards.