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    Help me plzzzz

    Hello ,
    I want send this letter below to my manager to increment my salary, could you please check if it is good.

    Dear Mr. abdul malik

    I kindly Request a salary increment .
    This is because the current salary of 5000 AED without a car.
    After taking the car from me, I am having trouble to travel to work and the cost a great movement and thu spend half of my salary to go to work>
    I'm looking forward to a favorable response from you.

    Thanks and Regards.
    Yours Sincerely
    Bilaila

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    Re: Help me plzzzz

    Quote Originally Posted by Bilaila View Post
    Hello ,
    I want send this letter below to my manager to increment my salary, could you please check if it is good.

    Dear Mr. Abdul Malik

    I kindly would like to request a salary increment.

    This is because the My current salary of is 5000 AED but without a car.
    After Since taking the my car from me was withdrawn, I am have been having trouble problems to travelling to work. and the My travel costs a great movement are very high and thu consequently I spend half of my salary to go travelling to work.

    I'm looking forward to a favorable response from you.

    Thanks and Regards.

    Yours sincerely

    Bilaila + surname
    See above.

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