1. Remember to put one single space after each full stop.It is very clear
nowthat English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different language before learning English is, in today's world, a waste ifof time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
To a great extent, English
languageis the first foreign language learned in all schools around the world and this can be seen in most people used this language in their practical life (I don't know what you mean here. Do you simply mean that many people use English on a regular basis?) Learning English hasis very important needsfrom my point of view, although othersome people prefer eto learn another language in order to be more professional in their worksat work. In this essay, I will look at some arguments for and against learning English to bein order to make it the international language.
First of all, it is considered to be the simplest method of communication between people. For example, in UAE
there aremore than 100 languages are used by people in this placebut the most common is English. We canuse it in allplaces such as hotels, banks transaction, restaurants, government establishments and intaxis.
exampleclearly shows the importance of English to keepin helping people to keep in touch.
It is obvious that English should be learned in all schools to
makehelp people understand each other.
Secondly, the development
sof most countries depends to some extendextent on people learning English for their peoples. For example, in my country all students start learning English when they becomeat the age of 11. years old and above afterThey use dEnglish in theirfor practical lifepurposes after graduation t. This early learning of English helps them to progress fastlyquickly, thereforeso they can introduceexplain any ideas or suggestions which may help into develop their country.
From the previous example, it is clear that English
educated peoplespeakers haveplay a very important role in the success of their country.
It is clear that English is very important in our
However, some people believe that learning other foreign languages before English
is sometimecan be valuable. For example, tourist guides have to learn specific languages to compete with other colleagues for better positions in hisat work.
After analysing the
area ofdirect effect of English on our lifelives as well as on the development of countries, it has been shown that English should be learned firstbefore any other languages.
2. Put a comma directly after the preceding word, but a space after each comma.
3. Check use of plurals.
4. My amendments are in red, queries in blue.
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