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    #1

    my sentence alright?

    A second hand taking information from primary sources then well written it becomes other source. This is secondary sources in historical study.

    or

    Obtaining from primary sources, then well written, information becomes other source. This is secondary sources in historical study.

    or
    Obtaining from primary sources then well written information becomes other source. This is secondary sources in historical study

    are these sentences ok and clear? no doubt?i can not find out errors myself. help me please.
    Last edited by sayla; 19-Aug-2010 at 13:44.

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    #2

    Re: my sentence alright?

    No, sorry.

    None of these sentences is OK or clear - at least to me.

    I do not know what it is you want to say.

    Rover

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    Re: my sentence alright?

    I'm afraid I agree with Rover. I cannot make any sense of anything that was said in your original post.

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