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    Please check the grammar

    It would be really great, if someone correct the grammar mistake of the below line.

    As per the discussion with team that they need the training on demo application.

    Anything needs to be modified in the above line. If it so, please correct it.

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    Re: Please check the grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by mgn_v View Post
    It would be really great if someone could correct the any grammar mistakes of in the below following line.

    As per the discussion with team that they need the training on demo application.

    Does anything needs to be modified in the above line? If it so, please correct it.
    It's not a full sentence, so you will need a comma at the end and then some more text.

    As per the discussion with the team regarding their need for training on the demo application, [I have set up a training date next month].

    If you want it to be a full sentence, then perhaps:

    As per the discussion with the team recently, I can confirm that they need training on the demo application.

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