See above.13) Sarah
Sarah is a polite girl. She helps her family with her (she can't help herself. Does she help them with "their" jobs?)
worksjobs or chores. She spends her leisure time tobreeding* herpets. She has three chickens and four rabbits. She breeds* the chickens in the morning, and fetches the rabbits some grass. Right now, the chickens are picking up the cereal, while the rabbits are eating the grass. (I don't understand why you have suddenly gone into the present continuous and started telling us what is happening "right now". The rest of the piece is simply a description of how Sarah spends her time.) Sarah likes her chickens and rabbits, and brings her family the chickens' eggs of the chickensand the meat of the rabbits.
*Please check the definition of "to breed". I have a feeling it's not the word you want.
14) Ahmed is in the garden
This is Ahmed. He did his homework and wrote his lesson (what do you mean? The person who usually writes the lesson is the teacher!). Now, he is in the garden, clapping and laughing happily. He is running behind a beautiful butterfly. He is running on the green grass. Ahmed is walking among the trees and smelling the roses and the jasmine. He is a polite and clean boy. He doesn’t pluck the flowers, cut the branches, stain his clothes or play with dirt and mud at all. Now, he is jumping, running and playing. He enjoys
with agood health.
Student or Learner