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    #1

    Smile plz help me

    Hello

    sorry I had to delete the content ....

    Thank you
    Last edited by faty; 27-Aug-2010 at 14:35.

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    Re: plz help me

    I really need someone to look at my work and fixes grammatical mistakes or any other mistakes, I would so much appreciate it, I know it's tooooo long and you might not bother read a long thread, but I divided my thread into parts so reading any part would so much be appreciated.

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    #3

    Re: plz help me

    ***Neither a teacher nor a native speaker.***

    Hi,
    Unfortunately, I can only give you some advice.
    Use articles or use plural here:
    There are multiple reasons for why making a connection is extremely vital in the classroom.
    Or:
    There are multiple reasons for why making connections is extremely vital in the classroom.

    Moreover, Gleitzman continuously uses a language in a successful way and constantly stimulated the readerís imagination.

    Or:
    Moreover, Gleitzman continuously uses languages in a successful way and constantly stimulated the readerís imagination.

    It would surprise me if your version were correct...
    And it makes me wonder why you use uses but not stimulates.
    (Or used and stimulated)

    Let's see if some other users will share their opinions with us.

    Cheers!

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    Re: plz help me

    i'm not sure but hopfully a teacher or native speaker could give us a comment

    thanx anyway

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