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    #1

    check my sentence :)

    Hi all

    I wonder if this sentence sounds acceptable

    My brother passed on 3 payments and now he is heavily in debt


    Does the position of pass on in the sentence make sense?

    Is there any other way i can say it !



    Thank you

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    #2

    Re: check my sentence :)

    Not a teacher.

    Do you mean he failed to make payment three times? Or failed to pay three bills he had to pay?

    Or that he refused to accept money from someone or something?

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    #3

    Re: check my sentence :)

    No thats not what i mean but thank you for you help



    I need A CRYSTAL CLEAR anwer

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    #4

    Re: check my sentence :)

    Not a teacher

    My brother passed on 3 payments and now he is heavily in debt!


    Your brother has skipped 3 payments of his bill. So he is deep in dept.
    (he has forgotten or something)
    OR
    Your brother has failed to pay 3 payments of his bill. So he is deep in dept.
    (he was not able to pay them on time)

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    #5

    Re: check my sentence :)

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    No that's not what I meant but thank you for your help.







    I need A CRYSTAL CLEAR answer.

    You cannot expect a crystal clear answer to a question which can have three different meanings.

    You need to answer SoothingDave's question first.

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    #6

    Re: check my sentence :)

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    Hi all

    I wonder if this sentence sounds acceptable

    My brother passed on 3 payments and now he is heavily in debt


    Does the position of pass on in the sentence make sense?

    Is there any other way i can say it !



    Thank you

    I mean he missed 3 payments

    Many thanks

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    #7

    Re: check my sentence :)

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    I mean he missed 3 payments

    Many thanks
    Just say "My brother missed three payments..."

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