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    How is this letter?

    Hello. I have written this letter to the university. I hope that you could give me your opinion about it and correct it if neccessary.

    Dear Committee,
    I would like to inform you that I am aware that my daughter ***** ***** ********* had left study in Zayed University in the fall of 2009 and she is willing to commence it again in the fall of 2010, and I will be responsible of the payment of her tuitions and any other expenses.
    I hope that she will be accepted and enrolled in the coming academic year.

    Thank you

    Yours, ***** ********
    Last edited by f.alawadhi; 27-Aug-2010 at 06:54. Reason: incorrect spelling

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    Re: How is this letter?

    Quote Originally Posted by f.alawadhi View Post
    Hello. I have written this letter to the university. I hope that you could give me your opinion about it and correct it if neccessary.

    Dear Committee,
    I would like to inform you that I am aware that my daughter ***** ***** ********* had left study in Zayed University in the fall of 2009 and she is willing to commence it again in the fall of 2010, and I will be responsible of the payment of her tuitions and any other expenses.
    I hope that she will be accepted and enrolled in the coming academic year.

    Thank you

    Yours, ***** ********
    Dear Committee

    My daughter, [name], suspended her studies at Zayed University in the fall of 2009. However, she wishes to re-commence her studies in the fall of 2010.

    I would like to inform you that I am willing to be responsible for the payment of all her tuition and any associated expenses.

    I would be very grateful if she could be enrolled at the university for the coming academic year.

    Yours sincerely


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    Re: How is this letter?

    Thanks a lot.

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