[NOT A TEACHER] "Its a sadness story"Hello
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Glory of GodThe glory God thatwho makes fate of the person in others' hands. I’m not matted and I am not sensitive, but I don’t blame me. What I saw made me feel that the life has no mercy. I saw young girl crying with the sadness out of her eyes. She came to me with tears and hug me strongly. My heart felt that she had painful story. I said to her cry, cry and cry maybe this would relieve you. Suddenly she spoke and said “I thought that he was loving me, goodness and his heart like a diamond. Then I found out that he is a deceptive. I loved him and my love was immeasurably. I thought that I was princess but I was worthless in his eyes. I sold my family and my friends even people for sake of his eyes. He took from me what he wants after that he sold me. I hope that he killed me before he showed me his otherface. Why he tramples on the heart of an innocent”. I said to hercalm down to her nothing deserves your tears. I hope God give you someone else who give you the love, respectable and happiness that you dreamed, someone who understand you, take care of you, loves you and love the sand that you walk on it. Just remember that is nothing impossible in this life.
Thank you alots
Other face "people don't have two faces". You ought to say "his face" and it is understandable.
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