mgn_v
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"Young people are spending too much time on computers and this will lead to a decline in the health and physical fitness of youths across the world."
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the world, most of the people are spending much time on computers. Young people are enjoying their time on computers and this will cause a health problem. People find everything on the Internet. I believe, young people should give the first priority to health.
There are a few disadvantages. Firstly, most of the people sitting in front of the computers can cause vision problem. When people concentrate more on the work or games, the body position will not changed. This will lead to spinal cord and back pain problem as well as vision problem. Young people should go for a walk often which can relax the body and brain. People should not sit continuously in the same position. People should change their position frequently which can relax the muscle. People should stare the monitor continuously. Frequently they have to change the focus to out of the monitor.
Secondly, brain needs rest for some time. Continuous work can lead to more stress on brain which affects the physical and mental fitness. This may lead to mental disorders also. Normally, human beings need minimum of eight hours sleep a day. To prevent the heart disease, young people should go for walk or jog or work out in the gym which can help them to stay fit. To prevent other diseases, people should aware of the negative effects.
To conclude, young people should not spend too much time on computers which will affect the physical and mental fitness. So, young people should concentrate on health to lead the better life.
"Young people are spending too much time on computers and this will lead to a decline in the health and physical fitness of youths across the world."
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the world, most of the people are spending much time on computers. Young people are enjoying their time on computers and this will cause a health problem. People find everything on the Internet. I believe, young people should give the first priority to health.
There are a few disadvantages. Firstly, most of the people sitting in front of the computers can cause vision problem. When people concentrate more on the work or games, the body position will not changed. This will lead to spinal cord and back pain problem as well as vision problem. Young people should go for a walk often which can relax the body and brain. People should not sit continuously in the same position. People should change their position frequently which can relax the muscle. People should stare the monitor continuously. Frequently they have to change the focus to out of the monitor.
Secondly, brain needs rest for some time. Continuous work can lead to more stress on brain which affects the physical and mental fitness. This may lead to mental disorders also. Normally, human beings need minimum of eight hours sleep a day. To prevent the heart disease, young people should go for walk or jog or work out in the gym which can help them to stay fit. To prevent other diseases, people should aware of the negative effects.
To conclude, young people should not spend too much time on computers which will affect the physical and mental fitness. So, young people should concentrate on health to lead the better life.