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    Is it correct?

    Is there any mistake in the following sentences? Can we express in a better English?

    Parents, your child hasn't made computer note-book yet. The class has already done 4 chapters. I am afraid he would lag behind. Please look into this matter.

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    Re: Is it correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by rainyday View Post
    Are there any mistakes in the following sentences? Can we express them in better English?

    Parents, your child hasn't made a computer notebook yet. The class has already done 4 chapters, and I am afraid he is lagging behind. (Having two separate sentences is not wrong, but it is better to sometimes combine two short sentences into one longer one.)

    Please look into this matter.
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