Unemployment

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UNEMPLOYMENT
The unemployment leads to increase commit suicide and crime, where the unemployment leads to worse financial situation. More people had lost their job for long time and that mean there is no income. So it is serious threat to live of the poor. The unemployment people may also feel that is no mean to live, and that leads to be depressed which leads to smoke, drink and suicide. In addition there are unemployment men who stole rice because he was too hungry and he didn’t have money to buy food. Finally, the unemployment effects on the behaviors such as smoking and drinking also it effect on social. So the government should be find solution to decrease the rate of unemployment.

please, correct it..and your advise...thank you ​

 

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UNEMPLOYMENT

[STRIKE]The[/STRIKE] Unemployment leads to crime and an increased [STRIKE]commit[/STRIKE] suicide rate [STRIKE]and crime[/STRIKE], [STRIKE]where the unemployment leads to worse[/STRIKE] due to worsening financial situations. [STRIKE]More people had lost their job for long time[/STRIKE] Many people are out of work for a long time [STRIKE]and that mean there is[/STRIKE] resulting in no income. [STRIKE]So[/STRIKE] It is a serious threat to the lives of the poor. [STRIKE]The unemployment[/STRIKE] Unemployed people may also feel that there is no [STRIKE]mean[/STRIKE] reason to live, and that leads to [STRIKE]be depressed[/STRIKE] depression which, in turn, leads to smoking, drinking and suicide. In addition, there are [STRIKE]unemployment[/STRIKE] unemployed [STRIKE]men[/STRIKE] people who [STRIKE]stole[/STRIKE] steal rice because [STRIKE]he was[/STRIKE] they are [STRIKE]too hungry[/STRIKE] starving and [STRIKE]he didn’t[/STRIKE] don't have money to buy food. Finally, [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] unemployment affects [STRIKE]on the[/STRIKE] behaviors such as smoking and drinking but it also [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] has an effect on [STRIKE]social[/STRIKE] society. [STRIKE]So[/STRIKE] The government should [STRIKE]be[/STRIKE] try to find a solution to [STRIKE]decrease[/STRIKE] the high rate of unemployment.

Please correct it and give me your advice. Thank you. ​

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Notes:

Unemployment = noun
Unemployed = adjective
Social = adjective
Society = noun.

Be careful with your use of indefinite/definite articles and punctuation.