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    #1

    The check

    We had sent a check for $ 1000/- to you on 28th August 2010 through a reliable courier service. Kindly let me know when you have received it. Please send $ 500 to Mr. Joki that amount I own to him & remaing $ 500 keep with you as your commission.


    Does the above context makes any sense??? Please correct where correction is nessary.


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    Re: The check

    Not a teacher.

    We've sent a check of $ 1000.00 to you on 08/28/2010 through a reliable courier service. Kindly let me know once you receive it. Please send $500.00 to Mr. Joki, as that's the amount I own him, and keep with you the remaining $500.00, as your commission.


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    #3

    Re: The check

    At least I think own should be owe in the given context.

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    #4

    Re: The check

    Quote Originally Posted by meela View Post
    We had sent a check for $ 1000/- to you on 28th August 2010 through a reliable courier service. Kindly let me know when you have received it. Please send $ 500 to Mr. Joki that amount I own to him & remaing $ 500 keep with you as your commission.


    Does the above context makes any sense??? Please correct where correction is nessary.
    On 28th August 2010, we sent a cheque for $1000 to you, via a reliable courier service. Please let me know when you receive it. Upon receipt, please send Mr Joki the $500 that I owe him. You may keep the remaining $500 as your commission.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 30-Aug-2010 at 14:40. Reason: Typo


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    Re: The check

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    On 28th August 2010, we sent a cheque for $1000 to you, via a reliable courier service. Please let me know when you receive it. Upon receipt, please send Mr Joki the $500 that I owe him. You may keep the remaining $500 as your commission.

    How about 'upon cashing' replacing 'upon receipt'?


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    #6

    Re: The check

    Sorry, my bad about the owe. :)

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