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    Please correct this E-mail or add some flavour.

    Subject: Telephony System Demo

    Referring to the subject, Kindly arrange an Engineer on coming Sunday 5th of September 2010 for meeting with Sonic & Telco.

    Regards,

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    Re: Please correct this E-mail or add some flavour.

    Quote Originally Posted by leeds View Post
    Subject: Telephone System Demo

    Referring to the subject With reference to the Telephone System demonstration, Kindly please arrange for an engineer on coming to attend on Sunday, 5th of September 2010, for a meeting with Sonic & Telco.

    Regards,
    See above.

    Please note that I have changed "telephony" to "telephone". The Free Dictionary gives the definition of telephony as:

    1. The transmission of sound between distant stations, especially by radio or telephone.
    2. The technology and manufacture of telephone equipment.

    I assume you're not having a demo of how sound is transmitted between stations, and I thought it was unlikely that you are having a demo of the technology and manufacture of phones. Am I right in thinking that you have had a new phone (net?) system installed and an engineer is coming to demonstrate how it works? If not, apologies and telephony may be correct.

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    Re: Please correct this E-mail or add some flavour.

    Thanks for your reply. its not a demonstration its a discussion for two telephone system integration, we need to ask the engineer what are the requirements for the integration. but this will be a demo for the management.
    I'm sorry for my poor English.

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