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    General.2

    I,ll kill you if you wonít tell me the truth.

    What will you do if he stops crying?

    Where do we go if you win the game?

    What will happen if you talk to him?

    How will you travel if you will get the money?

    Who might you see if you work in that company?

    Please Tell me, If These sentences are correct

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    #2

    Re: General.2

    Quote Originally Posted by Bamdad View Post
    I,ll kill you if you wonít tell me the truth. I'll not I,ll.

    What will you do if he stops crying? okay

    Where do we go if you win the game? okay, but I'd prefer "Where will we go..."

    What will happen if you talk to him? okay

    How will you travel if you will get the money?

    Who might you see if you work in that company? okay

    Please tell me, If these sentences are correct
    Please note the corrections to the capitalization.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: General.2

    Quote Originally Posted by Bamdad View Post

    I'll kill you if you wonít (or don't) tell me the truth.

    What will you do if he stops crying?

    Where do (or will) we go if you win the game?

    What will happen if you talk to him?

    How will you travel if you will get the money?

    Who might you see if you work in for/at that company?

    Please tell me if these sentences are correct.
    Apart from the ones where I have made amendments in red or suggestions in blue, they are all grammatically correct.

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