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    Smile favorite toy

    When I was a child, actually I did not play with toy, but some years later, I used to play with my only toy.
    It was a girl with blond bushy hair, with pink dress. I always carry it all the day long and sleep with her. I love it because it was the only toy that I have but I do not like to have any more else!

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    Re: favorite toy

    Quote Originally Posted by Mina.Gh View Post
    When I was a child, actually I did not play with toy, but some years later, I used to play with my only toy.
    It was a girl with blond bushy hair, with pink dress. I always carry it all the day long and sleep with her. I love it because it was the only toy that I have but I do not like to have any more else!
    When I was a child, I did not play with any toys but some years later, I started to play with just one toy.

    It was a female doll with bushy blonde hair and a pink dress. I carried it all day long and slept with it. I loved it because it was the only toy I had ever owned and I have never wanted another one!

    Note: Take care with your use of tenses. If you look at the ones I have marked in red, you will see that you used a mixture of the past and present tenses.


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    Re: favorite toy

    thanks alot
    I should try much more

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    Re: favorite toy

    Quote Originally Posted by Mina.Gh View Post
    Thanks a lot.
    I should try much more.
    We only improve when we practice!

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