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    Smile explain whom you admire

    She pays a lot attention to something more important in social life than dressing or how to make up.
    She does and acts what she wants and thinks it is true, not just for satisfy others or to be like someone else, because she believes in herself.
    Most of the people who know her, were pleased when they had even a short conversation with her.
    You will admit me if you see her lots of friends and realize how special are they, because I believe, we can recognize people by knowing their friends better.

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    Re: explain whom you admire

    Quote Originally Posted by Mina.Gh View Post

    She pays a lot of attention to something more important things in social life than dressing or how to make up clothes and make-up.

    She does and acts whatever she wants and thinks it is trueright, not just for to satisfy others or to be like someone else, but because she believes in herself.

    Most of the people who know her were pleased when they had even a short conversation with her enjoy talking to her.

    You will admit agree with me if you see her lots of many friends and realize how special they are. they. because I believe we can recognize understand people by knowing their friends better.
    See above. By the way, your title should use "who", not "whom".


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    Re: explain whom you admire

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    See above. By the way, your title should use "who", not "whom".
    Thank you very much
    could you tell me how you see my writing?
    I mean if you want to give me a number from 0 to 20, what is my exact number?

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