TomKQT
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Hello,
I would be very grateful is somebody could check whether the following messages are gramatically correct, clearly understandable and well worded.
They will appear on a display of a vending machine that sells milk. Not bottles of milk, you must bring your own bottle, hold it under a filling pipe and the machine fills it with milk.
Tom
I would be very grateful is somebody could check whether the following messages are gramatically correct, clearly understandable and well worded.
They will appear on a display of a vending machine that sells milk. Not bottles of milk, you must bring your own bottle, hold it under a filling pipe and the machine fills it with milk.
- Thank you very much for buying our milk. (appears at the end)
- Raw milk is recommended to be boiled before consumption.
- We are sorry, the vending machine is currently out of order due to the lack of milk. You may try it later.
- No change is given.
- Hold the bottle sideways to the filling pipe to prevent frothing. (appears during dispensing)
- The milk is being dispensed as long as you hold the button pressed. (appears during dispensing)
- accepted coins:
- acceptable coins:
Tom