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    is this letter making sence?/?

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    Re: is this letter making sence?/?

    It's basically meaningless to me, but I would change the first to

    Capturing human beings and nature in black ink, we drew with a smile that’s spreading everywhere, the four of us together.

    However, to be honest, I think there is a very strong case for scrapping it and starting again.

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