Ildus1988
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Can you check it if I connect three paraller structures right?
Many people have stress because they feel sick, have to go to work and have family problems.
Main reasons of divorces are extramarital affairs, immaturity and money issues.
And I have this three statement and wanna make a thesis statement.
1. Body language communicates more than words and can be similar and different depending on cultural attitudes.
2. What people wear for different occasions always communicates a message, but that message may be different in some cultures and simiilar in others.
3. Cultures are different and similar in how they communicate through facial expressions.
Here what I did:
Body language communication, facial expressions and apparels are vary and could mean different things in different culturals.
Many people have stress because they feel sick, have to go to work and have family problems.
Main reasons of divorces are extramarital affairs, immaturity and money issues.
And I have this three statement and wanna make a thesis statement.
1. Body language communicates more than words and can be similar and different depending on cultural attitudes.
2. What people wear for different occasions always communicates a message, but that message may be different in some cultures and simiilar in others.
3. Cultures are different and similar in how they communicate through facial expressions.
Here what I did:
Body language communication, facial expressions and apparels are vary and could mean different things in different culturals.
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