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First, I agree with Zinczenko’s point that most people, especially teens have few choices besides fast food. He asks “where, exactly, are consumers—particularly teenagers—supposed to find alternatives?” (Zinczenko 154). He points to the fact that just about any street has a McDonald’s.
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Why do you need to reword it? What is your objective in doing so?
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