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    how to reword this sentence

    First, I agree with Zinczenko’s point that most people, especially teens have few choices besides fast food. He asks “where, exactly, are consumers—particularly teenagers—supposed to find alternatives?” (Zinczenko 154). He points to the fact that just about any street has a McDonald’s.

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    Re: how to reword this sentence

    Hi and welcome to Using English.

    Why do you need to reword it? What is your objective in doing so?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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