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    In doing so

    "You have a question; we answer right away. We are able to handle your case quickly and efficiently because we work as a team. In doing so, we make use of the specialist knowledge of each of our employees."

    Does it make sense to use "in doing so" here?


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    Re: In doing so

    I don't like it much- it suggests that this is a bit of a by-product. How about putting a comma after team and making use of...


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