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    Tutankhamun

    Dear teacher,
    Could you please correct possible mistakes in these two sentences?

    This booklet is a collection of photos of relics from Tutankhamun's tomb with comments written specifically for the students of our college. It reflects a very important periods of Egyptian history the New Kingdom, - which (that?) ended in 1323 BC.

    Thank you.

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    Re: Tutankhamun

    Quote Originally Posted by ndexter View Post
    This booklet is a collection of photos of relics from Tutankhamen's (correct spelling) tomb with comments written specifically for the students of our college. It reflects covers/discusses a very important period (no "s") of Egyptian history, the New Kingdom, which (that?) ended in 1323 BC.

    I hope this helps.

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