sunnyday2410
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- Oct 1, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
Hi guy, the following is a brief of my story about the first-year in university. I really want to post full writing, but ... would you wait me 1hour :lol: for go out and come back to type all ^^!!
Please check it if it has any mistake in pronunciation or grammar, especially in meaning and logic of story!
Thank you in advance! ><
1.1.1. + Problem/Situation
- In the first-year, I might have been expelled from the university.
- The reason was that I could not control my voice in a tense debate with a teacher. At the end of the debate, the teacher warned me of expelling when I was crying without any supporting from my friends. At that time, a suspicion of my proud characteristics arose up, namely straightness and honest.
1.1.2. + What you did
- Although I was able to answer the question immediately, a reviewing me was carried out because I realized a lot of changes not to be considered from entering the university.
- Not perspicacious and experience enough, so I found an adviser, he was my father
- I wrote down all of my positive and negative manners. In addition, I also identified which characteristics I should improve and add more, which on I should change and adjust.
1.1.3. + The out come
[FONT="]- [/FONT]Helping me to believe that straightness and honest are always good characteristics.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]Identifying standard manners belonged to a grow-up man which I had just perceived at that time.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]I was aware of power of communication skills which I had never recognized when I had been in high school.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]The expelled was cancelled.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]Learnt Vital lesson: “Key to success in the life is using good thoughts of wise people” – Leo Tolstoy –
Have a nice day all member :lol:, It's morning in my country at the moment!
Please check it if it has any mistake in pronunciation or grammar, especially in meaning and logic of story!
Thank you in advance! ><
1.1.1. + Problem/Situation
- In the first-year, I might have been expelled from the university.
- The reason was that I could not control my voice in a tense debate with a teacher. At the end of the debate, the teacher warned me of expelling when I was crying without any supporting from my friends. At that time, a suspicion of my proud characteristics arose up, namely straightness and honest.
1.1.2. + What you did
- Although I was able to answer the question immediately, a reviewing me was carried out because I realized a lot of changes not to be considered from entering the university.
- Not perspicacious and experience enough, so I found an adviser, he was my father
- I wrote down all of my positive and negative manners. In addition, I also identified which characteristics I should improve and add more, which on I should change and adjust.
1.1.3. + The out come
[FONT="]- [/FONT]Helping me to believe that straightness and honest are always good characteristics.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]Identifying standard manners belonged to a grow-up man which I had just perceived at that time.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]I was aware of power of communication skills which I had never recognized when I had been in high school.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]The expelled was cancelled.
[FONT="]- [/FONT]Learnt Vital lesson: “Key to success in the life is using good thoughts of wise people” – Leo Tolstoy –
Have a nice day all member :lol:, It's morning in my country at the moment!