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  1. nyota's Avatar
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    #1

    enlightenment

    How can you make it sound smoother?

    --> 'A huge enlightenment came down on him'

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    Re: enlightenment

    Quote Originally Posted by nyota View Post
    How can you make it sound smoother?

    --> 'A huge enlightenment came down on him'
    Not a teacher only a native.

    You could say 'He became enlightened.' That is if it fits with the rest of the text.

    If this doesn't help could you post more of the sentence so we can get a better idea of what you are trying to say.

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    #3

    Re: enlightenment

    You may also look up the words "revelation" and "epiphany" whether they might be what you were looking for.

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    #4

    Re: enlightenment

    Informally - 'the penny dropped'.

    Rover

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    #5

    Re: enlightenment

    shroob
    I would like it to sound a bit more dramatic than 'he became enlightened' and I wouldn't like to bring it down to using 'suddenly' with it. I'll consider it though, thanks.

    euncu
    I'd like to stick to 'enlightenment' but thanks anyway.

    Rover_KE
    I love it! But can't use it (sticking to 'enlightenment')

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