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    #1

    Is there anything wrong with this text?

    Hi dear teachers!
    The following text is written by my friend and I just don't get the whole meaning of it!
    He won't tell me what it means! Would you please tell me if there is anything wrong with it?
    Does this sound like a witty or awkward text?

    My mind gets sick and there is a mess. Like the mess in my world full of you. It's noisy, I just walk but I see no one. All figures are crossing under my nose and showing me to each other. you flutter out of my loneliness.

    Thanks very much indeed.

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    #2

    Re: Is there anything wrong with this text?

    would somebody tell me if the text above makes sense at all? Specialy this sentence: You flutter out of my loneliness.

    Thanks very much

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