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Hi, I have to write an argumentative essay. My subject is changes in the world. I chose to write about the global warmning.
Here is the first sentence of my introduction.. I'm not sure if it makes sense to an English speaker... The second sentence is my thesis statement.
Change is perpetual in today's world. Because some of the things people knew and relied on are changing, their lifestyle and theirs behaviours can also change in many ways. The most important change that is happening right now in the world is the global warmning all around the planet.
Thank you for helping me.
If my sentence is not okay, can you help me finding another way to say what I wanna say. The only thing I need to keep is the word ''relied on''
I'm sorry, the THIRD sentence is the thesis statement!