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    Which one of the sentence is the most correct?

    1) I was sitting alone and then all of a sudden i thought about my parent.
    2) I was sitting alone and then suddenly i thought about my parent.
    2) I was sitting alone and then my parent come to my mind.

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    Re: Which one of the sentence is the most correct?

    A few changes
    1 - Make sure "I" is a capital letter
    2 - We don't usually refer to our parents in the singular. My mom, my dad, my parents.
    3 - All of the sudden
    4 - came to mind, not come to mind
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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