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    Can Someone Help Me Edit This IM IN A HURRY PLEASE

    Connections between Lost In Translation By Eva Hoffman And The Story Of An Hour By Kate Chopin

    yo may add or rearangeit if needed



    A story about a person who is experiencing difficulties.And the other story has that problem as well. the main characters are very alienated from others in and almost trance like state. theres aslso an inability of the main characters to connect with real life. i think the connections between the two of them is in the dysfunctional relationships and messed up societies in which the main characters find themselfs.

    i have fixed some of it and this is all i have for now

    Both lost in translation by eva hoffman and the story of an hour by kate Chopin explore the difficulties that individuals experience relationships. the stories convey a great deal of alienation.....


    and thats where i stoped and dont know what to say after that please help

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    Re: Can Someone Help Me Edit This IM IN A HURRY PLEASE

    What is it you think we can help you with?

    At the very least, please use proper capitalization and spelling.

    Have you outlined the points you want to cover?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.


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    Re: Can Someone Help Me Edit This IM IN A HURRY PLEASE

    I Dont know how to edit it
    i was hoping someone whould help me

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    Re: Can Someone Help Me Edit This IM IN A HURRY PLEASE

    Quote Originally Posted by LilJonWsc View Post
    I Dont know how to edit it.
    I was hoping someone whould help me.
    Editing sounds like a difficult thing to do. But all it means is to go through the text (the 'text' is your paragraph in this case), and change all the incorrect bits to correct bits.
    For example, you read your paragraph closely, and you come to: "difficulties.And"
    Well, you know there should be a space after a period, so you add a space: "difficulties. And" ... and so forth. That's called editing.
    Obviously you need to know what is correct and what isn't, but that comes with practice. Also, you should try to read more (good stuff).



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