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    "Adding Bayless is important for two reasons. First, his acquisition ends New Orleans' slapstick pursuit of a backup point guard that saw a head-scratching trade with the 76ers for Willie Green and another with the Spurs for D-League vet Curtis Jerrells. It goes without saying that Bayless is a massive upgrade on both."

    Shouldn't "on" be "over"?

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    Re: Upgrade

    Quote Originally Posted by Jasmin165 View Post
    "Adding Bayless is important for two reasons. First, his acquisition ends New Orleans' slapstick pursuit of a backup point guard that saw a head-scratching trade with the 76ers for Willie Green and another with the Spurs for D-League vet Curtis Jerrells. It goes without saying that Bayless is a massive upgrade on both."

    Shouldn't "on" be "over"?

    Thanks!
    I would put a comma after "Green", but I would accept "on".

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