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    please help me correct this sentence

    Ann's achievement exceeded that achieved by most of the students starting at a higher level.


    Does the above sentence work?
    Is it clear enouhg? Is it odd?
    How to make it better?

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    Re: please help me correct this sentence

    Ann's achievement exceeded that of most of the students starting at a higher level...
    ...would be better in my opinion.

    Rover

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